Figure Drawing: I figure

Another school assignment, this time from my Figure Drawing Class. Basically it was a free for all as long as there are figures in it. I decided to see if I could draw multiply figures in the same setting. The answer? Well sort of. Had a lot of help from the forums at ConceptArt.org, but I couldn't utilize some of the most helpful suggestions without redrawing the entire thing.
Which I unfortunately didn't have time for.
But here is the in progress work from value sketch to end result. I think everyone in the bottom two rows turned out fantastic, while most everyone up top looks a little off. Oh well, onward!